The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts show water consumption for different purpose at six different region of the world. The mentioned purposes are industrial use, agriculture use and domestic use.
Overall, the water used for agriculture purpose is maximum in all six region except Europe. The industrial use of water slightly dominates over the sum of of agriculture and domestic use in Europe. Comparing, the six areas industrial use of water in Europe is maximum followed by North America.
Considering, the use of water for domestic purpose the percentage is very less, ranging from 7-9% in last three area(Africa, Central Asia and South-East Asia). Whereas, this trend of domestic water use is ranging 13-19% in first region(North America, South America and Europe).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'region' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'regions'.
Suggestion: regions
... for different purpose at six different region of the world. The mentioned purposes ar...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
...f water slightly dominates over the sum of of agriculture and domestic use in Europe....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 638.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 120.0 196.424390244 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31666666667 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30975091965 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76058568665 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 106.607317073 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558333333333 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6548308049 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.1428571429 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29260457124 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157587657831 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07999608498 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224478797319 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920106653487 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.