The chart below shows the result of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy

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The chart below shows the result of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

The pie charts depict the reason for happiness among different age group by the result of the survey.

Overall, it can be manifested that both the age group(under 30 years and over 30) is very happy because of task achievement at the workplace. Another high reason for them is to pursue their hobbies.

First of all, the age group below 30 is mostly satisfied with their work task (31%). The other reason for being happy is to pursue their hobbies and it is around below quarters. Moreover, appearance is also playing the part to improve our joys is approximately 18 percentage. Travelling and other factors is also part of it in which former one contains 15% of enjoyment and for later one, it stands for 14% respectively.

Secondly, the group of people above 30 years gain happiness from work achievements just 32% and pursue their hobby at 24%. They can find happiness in financial security just two tenth of the chart. Furthermore, among them 14% if the people feel joyfulness while spending their time with family and 4% less for the other factors.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78142076503 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55563669707 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7856077853 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228404070836 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966994698891 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998968529732 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170553760137 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114046091601 0.0819641961636 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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