The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart below gives the data comparison of Australian’s habits in five different cities on buying and drinking coffee and tea in last 4 weeks in sequence.
It stated obviously that most people preferred heading to a coffee shop, especially in Melbourne, Hobart, and Sydney. But, it seemed contrary that people are not really interested in buying fresh coffee.
For going to café section, the people of Melbourne reach the top. It means they love to go to café for having a coffee or tea, and it proved by the highest number at nearly 65%, the neighbors are doing the same for Sydney and Hobart, at approximately 61% and 63%, the other hand the percentage of people in Adelaide was the lowest, below 50%. For the people who buy fresh coffee, the number shows below than 35% and nearly at 55%.
In conclusion, it was positive that Australians love going to café rather than having fresh coffee.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75316455696 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48669750409 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4854481669 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222633557764 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107116818673 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104897602857 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146486860739 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123896910841 0.0819641961636 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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