The given chart and table illustrate the proportion of visitors in four tourist locations and five various theme parks in Britain in 1999. In general, Museums, Galleries and Theme parks were strongly biased by travelers, whereas Black Pleasure Beach was the most popular place in Theme Parks sector in the same year.
According to the pie chart, tourists who came to Them parks accounted for 38% of the sample, followed by Museums and Galleries tripers with 1% fewer. In contrast, the historic houses and monuments, the wildlife parks and zoos were visited only by 16% and 9% of all, respectively.
In terms of Theme Parks, the most remarkable feature is BlackPool Pleasure Beach, where welcomed nearly half of the tourist population of British theme parks. The second and third locations that people decided to make trips are Alton Towers and Pleasureland in Southport, with 17% and 16% of total respectively. It is noticeable that the small equal amount of 10% of theme parks visitors went to each Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland in Windsor, as a result this percentage made these places get the lowest rankings in the list.
- The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, third, whereas, in contrast, in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04210526316 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59754838602 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636842105263 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.5420419509 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.857142857 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143635576535 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652561964589 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610719505883 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093597882159 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322401178664 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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