The pie chart illustrates about destination of Anthropology graduates from one university after their undergraduate degree program while the table indicates their salaries after 5 years of employment.
Overall, graduates who had chosen postgraduate study and part-time work marked the least path after the degree course while full-time employment was the most significant designation for Anthropology graduates. After five years of employment, graduates who were working for high salary found as government sector employees and private company employees became the lowest salary holders.
Destination of Anthropology graduates in full-time work, part-time work and unemployed was 52%, 15% and 12% respectively. The other designations including full-time postgrad study, postgrad study with part-time work and unknown had selected one-third of total indicated designations.
In regard to the salaries after five years of employment, 40% of freelance consultants, 50% of Government sector employees and 30% of private company employees received more than 100,000 dollars. Freelanced consultants, Government and private companies’ employees had received a salary between 25,000 dollars and 49,999 dollars respectively 5%, 5% and 10%. In addition, there were employees who had salaries between 50,000 dollars and 99,999 dollars.
- some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money others argue that it is better to try and improve such a situation 61
- More people put their personal information online e q address telephone number for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes is this positive or negative development 56
- In some countries owning a home rather that renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think is a positive or negative situation 67
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 67
- The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, third, while, in addition, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12299465241 4.92477711251 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07464774857 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572192513369 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5898922584 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.125 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271143885972 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131050427032 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136462564127 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204759187141 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16222979264 0.0819641961636 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 61.2550243902 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.51 11.4140731707 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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