it is often argued that nobody will pay attention to buy books or printed newspapers even if it does not appeal to you at all. I completely agree with the opinion and think that people will choose online materials rather than printed materials.
First of all, I believe even a child as well as adults have the ability to adapt to technology nowadays. There also many classes where distributing the technological knowledge for any age gap although it seems challenging for lot of peoples. For example, Once I saw 5 year old child was searching and watching his favorite cartoons in YouTube and I was surprised because when I was at that age, I didn’t even know that internet had existed or not. That’s why everybody will adapt to the internet reading that makes them satisfy than reading printed newspapers or books.
Secondly, people much more like to get anything for free than spending money for it. In other words, rather than buying a newspaper everyday people tend to browse internet or social media for latest news and updates, because it won’t spend a penny or not much as time for buying a newspaper and same goes for buying a printed book. For example, other day I asked my father to buy me a book and he responded, “why won’t you try to look some e-copy of that book and try to save money?”. Thus, read online without paying outweigh the drawback of buying printed newspapers and books in a long-term perspective.
To conclude, I strongly believe that people will go for online reading without paying a penny than buying printed materials because it saves their money and time.
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- some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money others argue that it is better to try and improve such a situation 61
- The charts below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main 67
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 67
- In some countries owning a home rather that renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think is a positive or negative situation 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is often argued that nobody will pay at...
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Line 2, column 278, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'child' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'children'.
Suggestion: children
...les. For example, Once I saw 5 year old child was searching and watching his favorite...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, as well as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75268817204 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50143263893 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3187061153 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.545454545 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251684913933 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113674809297 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960171547726 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186974998785 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832787644117 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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