the chart below shows women aged from 16 to 25 in a particular country who prefer to watch or participate in a variety of sports. summary the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares six sport activities that 16 to 25 years old woman who are either into watching or playing them.
In terms of watching physical activities, tennis and basketball were watched by a large percentage of females who were aged from 16 to 25, at 60% and approximately 55% respectively. On the contrary, only 10 % women were fond of watching golf. Besides, there was a small proportion of female audience in badminton and horse riding and racing, at just 5 % in both activities.
Looking at the participation of sport activities. 50% women played basketball. In addition. it is interesting to note that there is the same percentage of female players in tennis and golf, at just 30%. Badminton was the third popular sport to women, with 10% females playing it, which was higher than golf and horse riding and racing players, at 5% and only 1% respectively.
Overall, it is clear that most women enjoyed watching tennis, but horse riding and racing were least popular in this age group.
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- the chart below shows women aged from 16 to 25 in a particular country who prefer to watch or participate in a variety of sports summary the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: addition,
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, look, third, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90643274854 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75256206987 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619883040936 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.632364681 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2222222222 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142142505741 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573852023356 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053781100723 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966526738545 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395791263572 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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