The chart shows the depth of snow in a particular ski resort
The given graph illustrates the snow depth in a Canadian ski resort in 6 different months of 3 given years. From an overall perspective, the depth of snow is highest during February, March, and April. In addition, the figure for year two witnesses the most significant change throughout the 6-month period.
From November to January, year three hold the first place, with its figure ranging from 110 centimeters to 180 centimeters. Followed by year one, in which the data is 100 centimeters in November before gradually increasing to 150 centimeters in January. In February and March, the statistics for year one rise significantly, becoming the highest, at around 450 centimeters. Meanwhile, the snow depth of year three climb considerably, remaining at 350 centimeter in both months. In April, the data for both years decreases by approximately 50 centimeters.
The figure for year two remains the lowest during the first 3 months, at lower than 130 centimeters. It then experiences a skyrocket in the next 2 months, reaching 400 centimeters, becoming the second highest. Additionally, the data for year two reaches its peak in April, reaching more than 460 centimeters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 415, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'climb' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'climbdown', 'climbs'.
Suggestion: climbdown; climbs
...Meanwhile, the snow depth of year three climb considerably, remaining at 350 centimet...
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Line 2, column 452, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'centimeter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centimeters'.
Suggestion: centimeters
...ee climb considerably, remaining at 350 centimeter in both months. In April, the data for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22751322751 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07383273648 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582010582011 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.1251782699 43.030603864 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.8181818182 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0975341615651 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463757337219 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828063341548 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085671311089 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959460608723 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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