The provided bar chart illustrates the frequency among USA citizens of having meal in fast food restaurants in three seperate years 2003,2006 and 2013.
Overall, most Americans eat fast food once a week, once or twice a month while the percentage of "eating everyday" and "never" is the lowest during the period.
According to the chart, during 2003 and 2006, the percentage of people consuming fast food weekly is the highest, respectively 31 percents and 33 percents but fell down to 28 percents in 2013. This is in sharp contrast to the group who eat at this kind of restaurants once or twice a month when this figure reach the peak at 33 percents in 2013, while the percentage of the others years is from 25 to 30 percents.
In all three years, more people using fast food restaurant several times a week those who use it a few time a years. People who consume fast food at restaurant daily occupied only 4 percents of the whole population in 2003 but decreased to 3 percents in 2006 and 2013. A similar pattern is repeated in group that never visit fast food restaurants, but here the percentage is 5 percents in 2003 and dropped to about 4 percents in 2006 and 2013.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70616113744 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.786754038 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521327014218 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.9654184996 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.857142857 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1428571429 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284429751921 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155115792726 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837966938908 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186261015659 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935652804124 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.