The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given

The provided chart illustrates the bifurcation of landlines and mobile phone's customer in percentage among various 7 countries.

Comprehensively, the total landlines users in US, Canada and Denmark are higher than the total cell phone users. On the contrary, in Germany, UK, Italy and Sweden we observe a reverse trend where the cellular telephone buyers are higher than landline buyers.

In Italy, Sweden and UK cell phone usage is popular by minimum 80% and beyond whereas the percentage of land phone users in each country vary with almost 60% to under 70% to below 50% each respectively.
The statistics also shows that Italy has the maximum statistical figure of phone users with 90% whereas Denmark marks the highest land phone users among rest of the countries by almost 90%.

Countries like Canada, US share a similar trend of exceeding the land phone percent over cell phone . Although cellular telephone consumers are under 70% in both the countries, Canada marks telephone line users under 40%
and USA below 50% each depicting a significant gap between its utilization. Germany on the other hand shows variance in this trend and provides us with considerable drop by 20% among the two categories. Landline is popularly used in the country by 60% and cell by 70% each.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

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...countries. Comprehensively, the total landlines users in US, Canada and Denmar...
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...igher than landline buyers. In Italy, Sweden and UK cell phone usage is popul...
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...line buyers. In Italy, Sweden and UK cell phone usage is popular by minimum 8...
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...um 80% and beyond whereas the percentage of land phone users in each country vary...
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...rs among rest of the countries by almost 90%. Countries like Canada, US share ...
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...arly used in the country by 60% and cell by 70% each.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08490566038 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6545715254 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561320754717 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6653943835 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.777777778 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140321133087 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692569390016 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435457168115 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826753425675 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341003945175 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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