the charts below give information on the ages of the popılations of yemen and taly in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie charts compare the amount of population of ıtaly and yemen in terms of their ages in 2000 and ıt also make projections for 2050.
In 2000,the percentage of the people who were aged 0-14 years made up nearly half of the populatıon at 50,1% in yemen,just over the the amount of people who were aged 15_59 for this year ,more or less 15 times more than the proportion of those aged 60+.But this figure will slightly decreased in 2050,reaching excatly 37%,somewhat 7 times more than the proportion of those aged 60+ for this year.In contrast,the percentage of people who are aged 15_59 years will remarkably go up and will surpass the proportion of those aged 0_14 years in 2050,reaching nearly 58 %.
When ıt comes to the ıtaly,the proportion of people who were aged 15_59 years comprised more than half of the population at 61% in 2000,more or less 20 % more than the percentage of those aged 15_59 years in yemen for this year,nearly 3 times more than the proportion of those aged 60+ years in ıtaly.But this figure will significantly decline in 2050,reaching nearly 47 %,just over the proportion of those aged 60+ years for this year,somewhat 10% less than the percentage of those aged 15_59 years in yemen.Similarly the percentage of people who were aged 0_14 will slightly go down in 2050,reaching more or less 11 %,nearly 20% less than the proportion of those aged 0_14 years in yemen.
Overall ıt is clear that the number of middle ages people will increase in yemen in 2050 while this figure will decrase in ıtaly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, while, in contrast, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8007518797 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74542441193 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.390977443609 0.547539520022 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 22.4926829268 293% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 252.654284547 43.030603864 587% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 319.25 112.824112599 283% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.5 22.9334400587 290% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.5 5.23603664747 296% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 1.69756097561 1532% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198474066655 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192238829875 0.103423049105 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113408999456 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192238829875 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113408999456 0.0819641961636 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.4 13.2329268293 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.41 61.2550243902 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 10.3012195122 259% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.4329268293 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.9970731707 258% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 11.0658536585 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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