The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie charts illustrate changes in the population of Yemen and Italy, divided into three age groups from 2000 to 2050.
Overall, while the population of the 15-59 age group is predicted to experience an upward trend, the opposite will be true for Italy. It is also clear that both countries will show a decline in the youngest group and an increase in the oldest one.
In 2000, half of the population in Yemen was children aged 0 to 14, after which its figure is set to decrease by around 13% in 2050. Conversely, that of those at the age of 60 and over is likely to rise from 3.6% in 2000 to 5.7% fifty years later. Over the same period, there is projected to be a slight growth of roughly 10% in the percentage of people between 15 and 59, from 46.3% to 57.3%.
In comparison, Italian children aged 14 and younger accounted for 14.3% in 2000 compared to over 60% of the elderly. In the mid twenty first century, the forecast is that the figures for these two groups will witness a slight decline to 11.3% for the former and 46.2% for the latter. In contrast, it is anticipated that the proportion of 15-59-year-olds will increase almost double to reach 42.3% in the following five decades.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: twenty-first
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...or the former and 46.2% for the latter. In contrast, it is anticipated that the pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, if, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51834862385 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47205150292 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573394495413 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 16.75974012 43.030603864 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.444444444 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265438665175 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107290010277 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908263168396 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171506546192 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080100643881 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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