The charts below give information on the location and types of the dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of four different areas in a town where dance classes held, while the bar chart gives some data about types of dance classes and the number of people who enroll it by age in Australia.
It is obvious that private studios has highest percentage among others and pupils have a more tendency for signing up in this location and college-based located in the last place by its percentage. Although ballet has most of enrollments it is lowest in modern by a special age group and vise versa by another group.
As can be seen, there is nearly half percent of students go to private studios and other three areas are in order to almost a quarter, 18%, and one tenth. Thus, not only has private studios majority of participants but also, it is almost equal other three locations. The number of teenagers who go to ballet dance is more than 600 by under 11 and this reduce in tap and modern to 450 and 300. In contrast, who are have between 11 and 16 have like to attend in modern daces by over 500 and this trend decline to 450 and 300 in other two groups.
In conclusion, this town has a good potential for dancing and the people of society pay attention to it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the enrollments') or simply say ''most enrollments''.
Suggestion: most of the enrollments; most enrollments
... by its percentage. Although ballet has most of enrollments it is lowest in modern by a special age...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'studios'' or 'studio's'?
Suggestion: studios'; studio's
...d one tenth. Thus, not only has private studios majority of participants but also, it i...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...rn to 450 and 300. In contrast, who are have between 11 and 16 have like to attend i...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42986425339 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38087319168 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574660633484 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4722126897 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.375 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139014393598 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554066835143 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831860889002 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102157978672 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959791586052 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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