The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the country

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The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the country

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of agricultural products grown in the Western area and the Eastern area of the country.
Overall, it is clear that in two of the regions, the percentage of meat raised in the eastern area is precisely the same as in the western area. However, the majority of products in the Western area is grain.
In the Eastern Region, the top two products are meat making up to 35% of total agricultural production, and Dairy, making up to 30% of the total. The percentage of vegetables and grain products are just 20% and 15%, respectively.
In the Western Region, meat is the most popular product, with 45% of total agricultural production. Dairy and meat accounted for half of the total, while vegetable is the minority of total products raise in part of the area, only 5%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 669.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74468085106 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72403213802 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 106.607317073 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489361702128 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.769865602 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5714285714 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201545358843 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104044007575 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561984105412 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132714222638 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398436771519 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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