The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients,all of which maybe unhealthy if eaten too much.
The pie charts denote the midpoints of percentages in regular meals namely breakfast,lunch,dinner along with snakes.As is shown by the figures, In these mentioned meals the amount of three kinds of nutriments such as sodium,saturated fat,besides added sugar,which might have detrimental effects on health if over-consumed,is calculated in USA.
Looking from the overall perspective,It is apparent from the information provided by these charts that the highest amount of consumption of these three sorts of nutriments is allocated to the last meal of the day.nevertheless the least ingestion of mentioned nutriment is through the first meal of the day.In addition to these clear facts,it is also worthy to note that,the total percentages of ingesting these same nutriments for lunch as well as snacks are highly similar.
As is illustrated by the figures,despite the fact that the most consumption of saturated fat is recognized in dinner besides lunch at 37 percent and 26 percent respectively,the least ingestion of this nutrient as well as added sugar is through breakfast at 16percent.equally importantly to mention that where as the consuming of sodium in dinner is the highest percentage at 43,this nutriment has ingested the least by American people in breakfast along with snacks at 14 percent.
Further,as can be seen from the pie chart that reveals the percentages of added sugar in four regular meals,the most consumption of this nutriment is in snacks at 42 percent ,in stark contrast,however the small amount of added sugar is in breakfast as well as lunch at 16 percent and 19 percent respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 965.302439024 144% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38759689922 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47079984087 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519379844961 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 22.4926829268 285% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5832879942 43.030603864 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 347.5 112.824112599 308% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.5 22.9334400587 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.25 5.23603664747 463% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 1.69756097561 1414% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0950385253086 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665992213156 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400597964243 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665992213156 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400597964243 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.2 13.2329268293 274% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.52 61.2550243902 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.51609756098 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 10.3012195122 275% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.06136585366 129% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.4329268293 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.9970731707 251% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.0658536585 253% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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