The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

A glance at the pie charts provided display the amount of 3 elected particular nutrients ingested in Americans daily meals. It is clear from the information supplied that dinner has the riskiest threat by containing the highest rate of Sodium and Fat; in contrast, breakfast proves its healthiness in the lowest proportion among Sodium, Fat and Sugar. Snacks are potentially harmful revealed by the biggest contribution of sugar.
Appearance regards to the most splendid banquet, dinner has merely climbed to the peak in the pair of Sodium and Saturated Fat pyramids by the striking rate at 43% and 37%, respectively. On the other hand, dotting more or less than one fifth joint in every Sodium, Cholesterol and Carbohydrates bracket, breakfast has justified its reputation in healthy rank by the least threatening.
Displayed in the medium range, the two lunch and snacks present a consistent trend; though, the amount of Sugar in refreshments makes up the most abrupt transformation given by 42%. To be more specific, Sodium and Fat merely takes part in lunch listed at 14% and 21% while these figures illustrating lunch repast by 29%, 26% and 16%sorted up with Sodium, Fat and Sugar category.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, in contrast, more or less, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11224489796 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84671932444 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6410901364 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.142857143 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0245583790398 0.215688989381 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0126638759699 0.103423049105 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0237016968181 0.0843802449381 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.016789055568 0.15604864568 11% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143529960524 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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