The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pictures are the graphical representation of the increasing trend of electrical appliance over the time along with the trend of decreasing the amount of time spent on household chores in one country over the period of 1920 to 2019.
Firstly, as from the graph depicts, there is great increase in use of refrigerators if we compare from 1920 to 2019. Diagram shows that, percentage of households owning refrigerators in 1920 were 0 whereas in 2019 its 100%, implying every common home owns fridge.
Secondly, coming to percentage of families who owns washing machine in 1920 was 40% which got raised to 75% in 2019. And not lastly, numbers of houses owning a vacuum cleaner have also increased sharply. In 1920, percentage of household who are owners of a vacuum cleaner was 30, whereas this umber is 100% in 2019. This implies no one can live without a vacuum cleaner in 2019.
This exponential spike in ownership of electrical appliances directly effect the number of hours people spend in house chores. By use of second graph, we can clearly visualize, how duration of housework of people have reduced from 50 hours per week in 1920 to 10 hours per week in 2019.
Summarizing, technology and electronic have made human life easier and have reduced lot of housework hours. One can utilize this time in pursuing lot of new hobbies and spending some leisure time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90212765957 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63030360557 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582978723404 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5028213842 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.727272727 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21681695463 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077829901531 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594031317499 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119909156667 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629920903119 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.