The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.

The lines charts illustrate the students reasons for to study between students of different age community and between support they received from employers.

Overall, it can be seen that the highest reason students study according to age is under 26 to planing for career while the biggest reasons students over 49 years old prefer they are interested.

To begin under 26 years old the biggest people studying with age was percentages 80. While 26 until over 49 the percentages will be come down whereas who under 26 until over 49 will be going up for interested major.

On the other hand students of different age groups support they received from employers, under 26 was highest percentages 60. Wheares, the students under 26 until over 49 the percentages will be fluctuation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'chart'.
Suggestion: chart
The lines charts illustrate the students reasons for to ...
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Line 13, column 99, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the highest'.
Suggestion: was the highest
... they received from employers, under 26 was highest percentages 60. Wheares, the students u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 669.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 130.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14615384615 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37664837539 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60887198186 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 106.607317073 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 187.2 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2488499478 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316927030994 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19771751255 0.103423049105 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175745570882 0.0843802449381 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252372896885 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159452123658 0.0819641961636 195% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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