The charts below show the percentage of water used by different sectors in Sydney, Australia, in 1997 and 2007.
The pie charts compare the amount of water consumed by five sectors in Sydney, Australia from 1997 to 2007.
It is clear that food industry still was the sector using the highest amount of water in comparision with others, despite being reduced over the periods shown. Overall, the percentage of water consumption decreased gradually in most of sectors, except for household use and service industry
In 1997, a majority of the water consumption used by food industry, accounting for nearly a half, where as the minority was building industry with only 5%. After 10 years, there was a decrease to 41% in the figure of food industry, and the same trend also took place in Building industry and manuafacturing, which are fell to 2% and 11% respectively.
There was a upward trend in the amount of water used by household use and service industry. From 1997 to 2007, the figure of service industry soared to 25%, an increase of 12% over 10 years, whereas household use was recorded the modest growth from 19% to 21%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the sectors') or simply say ''most sectors''.
Suggestion: most of the sectors; most sectors
...ater consumption decreased gradually in most of sectors, except for household use and service i...
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...industry, accounting for nearly a half, where as the minority was building industry with...
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Suggestion:
...afacturing, which are fell to 2% and 11% respectively. There was a upward trend...
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, still, whereas, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81142857143 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5882245116 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2116725284 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.333333333 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264574755965 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150785148145 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119625146966 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193160826602 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120699370844 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.