The graphs show the monthly prices of rice exports from ThaiLand and VietNam from 2012 to 2015

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The graphs show the monthly prices of rice exports from ThaiLand and VietNam from 2012 to 2015

The line graphs give information on how prices of exported rice from Thai Lan and VietNam changed monthly during the period from 2012 to 2015.
It is immediately apparent that the monthy price of rice exports from Thailand was generally higher than the figure for VietNam's rice exports over the period shown. Overall, 2012 was the year in which The prices of exported rice was recorded the highest value in both countries.
As can be seen from the graphs, rice exported from Thailand was sold at 350 dollars per tonne, nearly doubled the exported rice prices of VietNam which only was 150 dollars/ tonne. During the year 2012, the figure for ThaiLand's export prices reached the highest value in February, at approximately 400 dollars per tonne, whereas That of VietNam was in November, with around 175 dollars for a tonne. It was 300 dollars for one tonne of exported rice from Thailand in January of the year 2013, before experiencing increase to 375 dollars in February and quickly dropped the lowest at 160 dollasr/tonne in April, from that maintaning the prices from 160 to 180 dollars at the end of 2013. Throughtout 2013, The price of rice exports per year from VietNam was slightly fluctuated from January to April, but later rise to approximately 140 dollars/tonne and ranged around this number over remaining months.
In 2014, The price of rice export decreased marginally from 150 to 100 dollars over 12 months given, while the figure for VietNam's rice export rose moderately from 60 dollars to nearly 110 dollars per tonne. Regarding to 2015, a similar trend in the change of the prices of rice export every months from two countries. Particularly, rice exported from VietNam and ThaiLand was sold at 25 dollars and around 55 dollars in January, before increasing to 50 and 70 dollars respectively in February but later the price went on with an increase of 20 dollars from both countries in the remaining months.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 33.7804878049 204% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 965.302439024 166% => OK
No of words: 327.0 196.424390244 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90214067278 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51789135216 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440366972477 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 283.868780488 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7830757957 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.3 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500752491654 0.215688989381 232% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.286044096756 0.103423049105 277% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114494307884 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.404944792076 0.15604864568 259% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877260799078 0.0819641961636 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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