The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy

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The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

The pie charts illustrate the outcome of a survey on a topic of what contributes to the happiness of people divided into two different groups under and over 30. Overall, achievement at work appears in both charts as the highest proportion. It is noticeable that while people over 30 take being with family and financial security as a source of happiness, those under 30 replace these two with traveling and having a good appearance.

Looking at the similarities, both the young and the old share the same pattern of the highest percentage which is an achievement at work with 31% and 32%, respectively. Both figures are followed by doing hobbies with 22% for people under 30 and 24% for those over 30. Other factors made up a minority percentage in both age groups with 14% for the young and 10% for the old.

In terms of differences, while people under 30 report that having a good appearance and traveling are the two factors contributing to their happiness with 18% and 15% in turn, those over 30 replace these two with financial security and being with family. Financial security accounts for a fifth. Being with family occupies 14%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80710659898 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66701879541 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507614213198 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5729477723 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.222222222 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102964756512 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051580637353 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774315516851 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796306622902 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588350877561 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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