The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how poeple think the costs of adult education should be shared.
Write a report for a university lecturer, desbcribing the information shown below.
The charts give explanation of adult’s decision of learning and express people’s perspectives of how the costs of adult education should be shared. Overall, It is quite obvious to realize that grown-ups’ liking for the subject is absolutely the main reason os taking courses. It is also noticed that most of the education cost should be funded by individuals themselves.
According to the figures provided in the first chart, we all an see that up to 40% of people continuing their learning process just for interest.Came second in the chart are people whose desiration is to obtain degrees, this group accounts for 38%. Whereas, the reasons of being handy for their running jobs , enhancing prospects of promotions or just having a passion for studying are in the range of between 20% and 22%.At the bottom of the survey are people wanting to move to other fields of work and persons hoping to meet strangers.
Regarding the costs of courses, 40% of adult tuition fee should be paid by learners. Employers were also responsible for 35% of the total fee. Another contributor to adult literacy taxpayers accounting for one -fourth of the overall fee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, regarding, second, so, whereas, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00518134715 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73906874844 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642487046632 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.6062779355 43.030603864 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280746742958 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118985076864 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894079944536 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183870163272 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712029588177 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.