the charts below show the results of surveys in 2005 and 2009 asking workers about their relationships with their supervisors and their co - workers.
Summarise the information by reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts show how workers thought about their relationships with their supervisors and their co – workers through surveys conducted in 2005 and 2009.
Overall, people had a very good or good relationship with their supervisors or their co – workers between 2005 and 2009, especially these relationships was likely to become better during 4 years.
According to the chart, 2005 to 2009 saw a slightly rise in the number of people feeling very good with their supervisors, from 61% to 65%. The next higher percentage of people who said good about their relationships fell by 4% to 22% in 2009. There were not many people had negative opinions on their relationships and not many people not having a supervisor. Furthermore, everyone answered the surveys in 2009.
As well as the relationships with supervisors, there was a significantly increase in the number of people getting along well with their co – workers, when the percentage rose by 7%. The number of people said that their relationships was good nor fair decreased, while people not having co - workers increased. Fortunately, no one had poor relationships in 2009.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('rise') instead of another adjective.
...ccording to the chart, 2005 to 2009 saw a slightly rise in the number of people feeling very go...
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Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('significantly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...lationships with supervisors, there was a significantly increase in the number of people getting along w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08556149733 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99011404934 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513368983957 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6357080628 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410781866512 0.215688989381 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199443234093 0.103423049105 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134591041915 0.0843802449381 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3256268091 0.15604864568 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127340063519 0.0819641961636 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.