The given two bar graphs provide employment information excluding full-time employment on UK graduate and postgraduate students after they left college in 2008.
Overall, the majority of both graduate and postgraduate students preferred to pursue higher education, whereas voluntary work was the less prominent career path among students.
As we can see from the first chart, further study prevailed among graduate students in 2008 (29,665). Unfortunately, the number of students involved in part-time job accounts for 17, 735 which is slightly above the number of students coped with unemployment. With regards volunteering, a mere 3500 students chose a voluntary work as a occupation after graduation.
In the same way, the huge quantity of postgraduate students continued further education (2,725). However, almost the same number of postgraduates engaged in part-time employment. Similar to graduate students correlation between students went to volunteering and jobless postgraduates is approximately 1 to 5 which is 345 and 1,625, respectively.
- In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transportDisucss both the 95
- The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of the young aldults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantage 95
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compar 78
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.Discuss both views and five yo 75
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, whereas, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85714285714 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2498686352 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655844155844 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9165699921 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233292899026 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990762863717 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538608943332 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143710671214 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555758280686 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 11.4140731707 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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