The charts blow show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
THe pie charts illustrate the proportion of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
As can be seen from charts, it is evident that the highest percentage of using water is for agriculture in four areas such as: South America, Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia; while this for industrial use is in North America and Europe.
First of all, in South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia, water used for agriculture is the most bigger percentage, accounting for 71%, 84%, 88% and 81% respectively. Secondly, domestic use occupies 19%, 9% and 7% respectively in three former countries, while this figure is 7% in the latter country. Moreover, other purpose is industrial use which represents 10%, 7%, 5% and 12% respectively in those areas.
On the other hand, the most water consumption for industry in North America and Europe accounts for 48% and 53% respectively. In North America, the proportion of agricultural use relates to 39% and 13% for domestic use. Meanwhile, this figure of agricultural and domestic use in Europe makes up 32% and 15% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 109, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'bigger' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: bigger
...Asia, water used for agriculture is the most bigger percentage, accounting for 71%, 84%, 88...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23626373626 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80338802562 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3617552928 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.125 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.23603664747 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332681849482 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169010845054 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170286765969 0.0843802449381 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274075127255 0.15604864568 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.190526588083 0.0819641961636 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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