The charts provide information about people’s travel in one country.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Reports aim to provide information about how citizen of undentified country transport over a twenty years period. Information is separated into two graphs which tell a different account.
Overall, personnel mostly spent a time for travelling in 2005 which took the highest distance as well. Crucially, in 2015, the number of time taken was hitting a lowest point with the lowest distance also. Essentially, during 2005 and 2015, most people chose to travel by their personal transportation.
Considering to the relationship between time taken and distance travelled, it obviously see that both information was relating to each other. In 1995, people spent the time outside their home counted as 370 hours approximately while the distance was travelled for 7000 miles. Then, the number of mutual data rose considerably and subsequently rose to the peak in 2005 counted as 390 hours and 7200 miles tentatively. After that, there was a drastic decrease to around 370 hours and 6700 miles. Eventually, hitting the lowest number was occurred in 2015.
When deep analyze through the type of travelling, the account shows that a percentage of each mode of transportation in various years didn't have a gradual change. other private trevelling was used mostly in this nation around 64 percent while 26 percent approximately was counted for walking or cycling. Also, the percentage of people using public transport was counted for 10 in mean tentatively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...5, the number of time taken was hitting a lowest point with the lowest distance a...
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Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...a lowest point with the lowest distance also. Essentially, during 2005 and 2015, mos...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sees'?
Suggestion: sees
...en and distance travelled, it obviously see that both information was relating to e...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...mode of transportation in various years didnt have a gradual change. other private tr...
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Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Other
...ious years didnt have a gradual change. other private trevelling was used mostly in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2683982684 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86373370732 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601731601732 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1495287333 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6153846154 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109286907363 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433492519081 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599842384243 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835553573442 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803280617202 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.