The charts show air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates air pollution levels by electricity generation, transport, and industry in 2021. PPM is used as the unit.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that China is contributing the most to overall air pollution whereas Australia is the least. Transport is the major cause of air pollution globally.
In the case of China and Japan, both are industrialist countries. In China industry is contributing by 80 PPM whereas transport is 70 PPM and electricity generation is almost 60 PPM. Similarly, In Japan, the industry is just above 40 PPM, transport is 30 PPM, and electricity generation is around 15 PPM.
On the other hand, America and Australia are much more behind in industrialization meanwhile America is contributing second to China in global air pollution. In America transport cause the highest pollution by almost 60 PPM where electricity generation is just above 30 PPM and industry just below 30 PPM. Meanwhile, Australia maintains an equilibrium position by remaining just below 20 PPM by all the sectors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, similarly, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21556886228 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16469190278 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497005988024 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6993702721 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0902857456448 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529807918151 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726526126667 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907434374641 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696517921489 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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