The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.
What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
We all know the risks of smoking but still many people are not concern about it. By taking correct measurements this global problem can be irradiated.
Knowing the dangers of smoking yet many people continue with this habit and the causes are many. Firstly Nicotine is one of the cause why many people cannot quit smoking. Nicotine is the main ingredient of smoking products which is very addictive and every time it produces a thirst to smoke. Secondly, smoking is a kind of fashion among teenagers and bad communities make it worse. In addition, smoking products are much cheaper in many countries, as a result, it becomes more available. And lastly, Due to the lack of social awareness, this is becoming harder to solve this problem.
To diminish this social disease combined effort is a must. As Nicotine is a toxic substance Government should raise the tax on it. family and education institutions have to motivate teenagers to avoid these kinds of hazardous materials and boost them with a positive vibe. The government has to limit the availability of these products and raise the price to such a extend that people would discourage themselves from smoking. And lastly, nothing can be possible without social awareness. People have to be conscious of the risks and effects of smoking also government should arrange some informative programs about the deadly effects of smoking on a regular.
To conclude, this is to say that one-sided effort cannot overcome this global problem. By working combinedly government and people this social disease can be eliminated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...se products and raise the price to such a extend that people would discourage the...
^
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...se products and raise the price to such a extend that people would discourage themselves...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, as to, in addition, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09266409266 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66931947674 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552123552124 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2080638195 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4375 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272584110533 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935859630344 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873963225978 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172181586609 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654514569607 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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