The climate graph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.
The chart gives information regarding the average volume of rainfall and temperature over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.
Overall,it is noticeable that monthly figures for precipitation in Kolkata vary considerably,whereas monthly temperatures remain relatively stable.rainfall is the highest from July to August,while temperatures are highest in April and may.
regarding the average temperatures in Kolkata ,we see that between the months of January and may,they rise from their lowest point at roughly 20°C to a peak of just over 30°C.monthly rainfall in the city also rises over the same period,from approximately 20mm of rain in January to around 100mm in may.
Turning to the amount of rainfall,it is clear that while temperatures stay roughly for the next four months,the volume of rainfall more than doubles between may and June.Figures for precipitation remain above 250mm from June to September,peaking at roughly 330mm in July,followed by a marked decline to a low of about 10mm in December,lower than the initial 20mm mark in January.In addition to the final three months,temperatures steadily drop back to the first month norm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, regarding, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49720670391 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56572533696 2.65546596893 134% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597765363128 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.742424011 43.030603864 288% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 246.0 112.824112599 218% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.75 22.9334400587 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.23603664747 286% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257574104689 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174451119691 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546043565811 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174451119691 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546043565811 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.9 13.2329268293 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 61.2550243902 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.51609756098 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.3012195122 210% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.51 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.