The given line diagram graphically represents the consumption of three spreads namely, butter margarine and low fat between the years 1981 to 2007.
Overall, while the consumption of margarine and butter went down, that of low fat & reduced spreads saw an upward trend
The highest consumption during the given years was seen with butter .Gradually it rose from 140 grams to peak at 160 grams in 1986. Eventually, the intake of butter dropped down to 100 grams in 1991 and further to the lowest of about 55 grams in 2007.
Similar pattern was observed with margarine, whose consumption declined from around 90 grams to 80 during the initial five years of the study. Further, it rose to 100 grams which was its maximum and it remained stagnant until 1996. After which the usage was seen to reduce further, to become the least consumed spread in 2007 (40grams).
Low fat and reduced spread came into utilization during 1996(15 grams) , their usage rose significantly during 2001 to more than 80 grams after which they had a decline to 65 grams , which was the highest among the three during that year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88829787234 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37651355386 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6946186634 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.285714286 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211778157715 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11002875506 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967811765838 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155251877008 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090129221599 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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