The diagram below give information about the Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to extend it underground.
The given diagram illustrates structural layout of the Eiffel Tower with its future expansion model while the map shows the exact location of the Eiffel tower in the Paris.
Overall, as can be seen that they are planning for building five floors under the Eiffel Tower where Shops, Restaurants, Cinema, Museum and Car parking will be available.
Regarding the map, The Eiffel tower is situated in the eastern part of the Paris at the bank of Seine river and also ways to other tourist location from Tower has also been briefed in this map. In diagram, the total height of the tower is 324 meter in which two platforms are at different heights of 57 meter for first and 115 meter for second platform. In addition to this, 10,100 tonnes metal structure is consumed for building the Tower which has total 1665 steps to climb up to second platform of the Tower.
On the other hand, the diagram depicts the projection for making floors below tower in which there will be provision of lifts for movement of people as well as vehicles. The access to the underground floor will be at first level beside the ticket office where we will have tickets for Cinema and Museum which will be at third level. There will be shops and restaurants for visitors of tower at second level including additional parking facility at fourth and fifth level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ocation from Tower has also been briefed in this map. In diagram, the total heigh...
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Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'meter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'meters'.
Suggestion: meters
...m, the total height of the tower is 324 meter in which two platforms are at different...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'meter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'meters'.
Suggestion: meters
...latforms are at different heights of 57 meter for first and 115 meter for second plat...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'meter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'meters'.
Suggestion: meters
...t heights of 57 meter for first and 115 meter for second platform. In addition to thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, second, so, third, well, while, as to, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7264957265 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24875676889 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 14.8697469716 43.030603864 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 138.25 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.625 5.23603664747 260% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163076572596 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811052600966 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049188584194 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106935164269 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414982676105 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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