The diagrams below give information about the Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to extend it underground.

Essay topics:

The diagrams below give information about the Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to extend it underground.

The diagram provides sufficient information about Eiffel Tower in Paris, France and an external project to develop it behind the surface. Overall, as it can be seen there are five levels in the base of the tower.
As is given in the diagram, the Eiffel Tower is constructed by a double main part. There are a viewing platform in the top of the tower which has 1665 steps. The basic part include of five levels, ticket office and access to tower, shops and restaurants, cinema and museum, parking, and parking from top to buttom, respectively. Some of the most important statistics about the Eiffel Tower will be mentioned. The height is 324 meters, The weight of metal structure is a little more than 10000 tones, first platform is about 55m, and second platform is exactly 115m. The Eiffel Tower has been built in the west of some famous buildings likes, Musee du Louvre, Place de la Concorde, and Hotel des Invalides, and in front of the Seine river.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'platforms'?
Suggestion: platforms
...a double main part. There are a viewing platform in the top of the tower which has 1665 ...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67857142857 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41194119279 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630952380952 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.002976085 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257673585397 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112898853503 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989250194518 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227888932423 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647953570577 0.0819641961636 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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