The map shows the Hawaiian island chain, which is located in the middle of the Pacific Ocean. Overall, there are eight major islands that are formed of volcanoes.
The Hawaiian island chain began to form almost 80 million years ago in below the Pacific Ocean because of eruption on the seafloor. Firstly, after the techtonic movements, 'Hot Spot' have been occured on the ocean bed, which caused the emergence of underground magma. Actually, magma is originally 2.883 deep on the seafloor, but is magma spume was formed because of remaining stable of hot spot. Afterwards, numerous eruption took place, which occured the youngest volcano. Finally, it emerged above the surface of the Pacific ocean.
The major islands in the Pacific ocean are Niihau, Kauai, Molokai, Lanai, Maui, Kahoolawe and Hawaii are 100 km away from each other, and these islands stand over solid dense rock, the Pacific plate that shifts around 7-9 cm per year.
- The diagram below shows how potato chips are made Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 73
- The map below shows the changes in an American town between 1948 and 2010 73
- The world would be a happier place if we all enjoyed our work To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view 82
- The diagram shows the process of making recycled paper from old newspaper. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparison where relevant. 78
- Discuss when if ever a capital punishment can be viewed as a valid punishment for crime 72
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07096774194 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23605867023 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658064516129 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.6567600124 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184188692822 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866381232889 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783659765858 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13594613102 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373197826711 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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