The given line chart demonstrates how many parcels delivered among two major mail services companies which are FedEx and TNT within the period of time starting from 1920 to 2000.
Overall, althought FedEx was the most popular mail services companies at first, it was replaced by TNT towards the end of the period.
At the beginning of the period, 15000 parcels delivered by FedEx in 1920 then went up remarkably during 2 years and reached to the highest point about 24000 in 1940. However, this upward trend was abruptly broken and the number of delivered plummeted dramatically over the middle of 1960 to reach a little above 12500. This was following by another climbed, althought much steeper, in 1980 when point was almost 5000 higher than in 1960. Then points experienced a minimal droped and reached 17500 in the end of the period.
The point of sending by TNT was a little more than 5000 at the beginning. Following this, it climbed remarkably during 4 years and approached to 12000 in the middle of 1960. Then it saw a minimal drop of about 1000 in 1970. The amount of parcels distributed by TNT considerable growth and outstripped number of FedEx almost in 1992 and peaking at a little less than 24000 in the end of the 2000.
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- University education should be free to everyone regardless of income To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000. 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...nies which are FedEx and TNT within the period of time starting from 1920 to 2000. Overall,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75115207373 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47700889457 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520737327189 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5741705732 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210114008428 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780186215013 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100784044393 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151701813813 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113919108461 0.0819641961636 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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