The illustration shows the natural cycle of Carbon dioxide (Co2).
Frist of all, Carbon dioxide is influenced by animal and plant respiration. Living creatures on Earth inhale oxygen (O2) and exhale carbon dioxide. On the contrary, plants has the reverse system, they take Co2 and release O2. Other component which contributes to amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere is auto and factory emissions from burning fossil and fossil fuels.
Fossil and fossil fuels which are main energy resource used by mankind are formed naturally by long-lasting process. Firstly, plants take photosynthesis which are formed by sunlight and C02 on the air. Secondly, organic carbon is created underground by decay organisms from vegetation, dead organisms and waste product from animals. After a long period, fossil and fossil fuels appear in the deeper level underground. Thirdly, they are excavated to produce energy for the use of vehicle and factories.
In general, carbon dioxide plays a vital role for living life on Earth. Moreover, it was revolutionary that human found a way to make use of fossil resource to serve industrialization.
- The diagram below illustrates the carbon cycle in nature 78
- Some people think climate change has a negative impact on business while others think that it provides more business options Discuss both view and give your own opinion 89
- An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries What problems does this cause What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation 67
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Other however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for commmitting it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment D 80
- The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are main energy resource used by mankind are formed naturally by long-lasting pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in general, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35195530726 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84377846077 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620111731844 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8564412779 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8333333333 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159826934457 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687318567516 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119146129794 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158648654597 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169281687524 0.0819641961636 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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