In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of telling children that message?
In some places, children are told that if they put enough effort, they will gain what they want. Even though it’s very supportive idea that encourages children considerably, this statement has pros and cons to be discussed.
It’ true that children are future of mankind, they have a lot of potential that we cannot imagine how they would turn out to be. It’s very ideal that they are motivated from young age to try hard and work for what they dream of. In formative years, if children set a specific goal to hold on to it, they are more likely to turn to be successful adults in the future. When adult keep telling children that idea, they encourage children to have faith in what they do and believe in themselves. It also shows that children have support from their family and beloved ones. We can easily see on Internet some inspirational quotes from celebrities that if they want something they didn’t dream of it but they needed to work for it. One general formula that works for every successful people is trying hard. For example. a superstar football player Cristiano Ronaldo who is known as best football player of all times , the whole world knows that he wasn’t born a genius but he practiced extremely hard from very young age to become a professional , he did it with passion and resistance that nobody can imagine.
On the other hand, there are disadvantages if children are not capable of making their dream comes true. Children are very naive and innocent when they believe in thing that adults tell them they will stick to it. It’s obvious that not everybody can have what they want no matter how hard they try . In case of children , if they have a success. failure , it will lead to tremendous frustration to them and they will lose confidence in themselves. As a result , the consequence could be psychological issues for them and it would affect their grow up process.
In conclusion, motivating children can be substantially beneficial; however, adults also need to educate them about importance of failure because to have success, you have to face some failures. Thanks to those failures, we can appreciate more the success
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 62.0 24.0651302605 258% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81989247312 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57295907813 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540322580645 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0746486855 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6111111111 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406967225697 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141418448545 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109859295484 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263010650539 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983612619375 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.