the diagram below show the changes of a cinema from 1980 until now. summarize the information by selecting and reporting features and making comparisons if needed
This diagram illustrates a changing trail of a cinema in 1980 and current time; in general there could be seen small changes in the placement of the spaces and the zoning in 2 two diagrams.
overall, a significant change is the expanding and growth in the entire area of the cinema currently which is due to the elimination and omitting of car park space that can be seen in 1980’s diagram, and consequently the Prominent change during this specific period of time would goes by increasing the number of cinema halls, thank to the extended area which particularly reached to 5, while there was only 2 halls in 1980, this means the number of movie fans and people who come to this place has enlarged but the notable fact which could be mentioned is that the number of toilets and rest room has stayed the same from 1980 to current, which was expected to meet a growth during time. The service areas has developed included by relax room, foods and drinks DVD shops and ticket counter now, in comparison to 1980 which was only limited to a ticket counter and drinks.
- In some countries there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days Why is this Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music 73
- Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas Why is this What problems does this cause 56
- In some countries there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days Why is this Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music 61
- the diagram below show the changes of a cinema from 1980 until now summarize the information by selecting and reporting features and making comparisons if needed 78
- Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas Why is this What problems does this cause 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...es and the zoning in 2 two diagrams. overall, a significant change is the expanding ...
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Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the entire area of the cinema currently which is due to the elimination and omit...
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Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: IN_1990s[2]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1980’s'.
Suggestion: in the 1980’s
...ting of car park space that can be seen in 1980’s diagram, and consequently the Prominent...
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Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e Prominent change during this specific period of time would goes by increasing the number of ...
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Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...ring this specific period of time would goes by increasing the number of cinema hall...
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Line 2, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cinema halls, thank to the extended area which particularly reached to 5, while t...
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Line 2, column 710, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a growth during time. The service areas has developed included by relax room, f...
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Line 2, column 712, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
... growth during time. The service areas has developed included by relax room, food...
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Line 2, column 725, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g time. The service areas has developed included by relax room, foods and drinks...
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Line 2, column 796, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and drinks DVD shops and ticket counter now, in comparison to 1980 which was onl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59685863874 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38960358896 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570680628272 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 22.4926829268 280% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 237.826734316 43.030603864 553% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 292.666666667 112.824112599 259% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.6666666667 22.9334400587 278% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 5.23603664747 280% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158074152251 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113236661068 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030198905814 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140041918344 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116018919897 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.1 13.2329268293 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 61.2550243902 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 10.3012195122 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.29 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.9970731707 247% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.0658536585 253% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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