In some countries there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days.
Why is this?
Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music?
Recently, the taste of music and vocals has encountered/experienced huge diversities by individuals, who are its major fan as well as the artists who play an instrument professionally. Many believe that an honorable notice to classical music neither by fans nor by players cannot be seen by young generation and hence, they believe there should be some unavoidably maintenances in order to encourage young adults to listen to classical types as well as tend them to play the related instruments skillfully. Here in this essay, I am going to put into words why the attraction and tendency to classical and vintage style music has faded out in young aged people, also whether there ought to be severe demands to encourage them get back to this style in current years or not.
To survey in music with all its included aspects as a trend, there we face epic fluctuations and inspiring terms trough out the time. The number of people who is known as inexperienced vocalists as well as instrument players has drastically increased in recent years. Meanwhile a considerable type of instruments has been appeared newly, which worked out successfully in attracting their own group of fans. For instance Rap and some style of Digital Rock music are new founded styles which have the highest rate of fans in some countries. So, the music industry today is not dedicated to a limited number of known talented artists as opposed to past days, when they were appreciated by most of the people worldwide. Gap
Since the seventy's and wide spreading of industrial revolution globally, each day different people has joined this industry, and now it is a platform that belongs to everyone. However old generation still believe that the classic melodies in decades ago are more valuable than current tracks and vocals and elimination of classical music by young generation is not accepted. As a matter of fact, in today’s world no one can emphasize on a specific type of music as the best one or more preferable one, because we are now facing a total competing market in this industry and everyday many bands and individual vocalist as well as instrumental players impact their recently added fans and people in many ways and put a lot of efforts simultaneously to keep them in their own circles, so orienting young men and woman toward an oldie like classic does not seem to be approachable.
To sum it up, one of the contemporary features of music industry is its considerable number of styles and voices, music is still one of the greatest factors for mankind to get inspired by in different situation and therefore limiting the mindsets and tastes of people in listening to this magical art is rarely possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2244.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 458.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89956331878 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90145016737 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53711790393 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.170781414 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.0 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1666666667 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370321731201 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119562987879 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765499634681 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207094503249 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969184059918 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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