The first graph demonstrates the transformation of a silkworm in a ordinary life. Whilst, the second diagram illustrates the procedures to manufact silk cloth.
Overall, the silkworm transforms from egg to moth in the life cycle. The production of silk cloth entails five steps to produce cloth from cocoon.
The life of a silkworm involves different stages of transformation. First, the mature moth lays eggs on mulberry leaf and it takes ten days for the eggs to hatch. Second, the eggs will hatch in to silkworm larva and the larva feed on the mulberry leaves for 4 to 6 weeks. Third, the mature larva generates silk thread to form a cocoon, which would spend 3 to 8 days. Forth, the larva undergo the transformation in the cocoon and it will become a moth after 16 days.
The manufacture of silk cloth uses cocoons as raw material and requires five procedures. The first step is selecting cocoons after moth left it. The second step is boiling the cocoon in water. The third step is unwinding the cocoon to retrive silk thread and one amazing fact is that a cocoon is made from approximate 300 to 900 meter of silk thread. Afterward, the forth step is twisting the threads into bundles. In this stage, producers can choose to dye the line. The last step is weaving the line to cloth adn also the producers can dye the colth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s selecting cocoons after moth left it. The second step is boiling the cocoon in wa...
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Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd step is boiling the cocoon in water. The third step is unwinding the cocoon to r...
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Line 7, column 330, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'meter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'meters'.
Suggestion: meters
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66949152542 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57240733893 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529661016949 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 15.0 4.33902439024 346% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7047539377 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.875 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156440295876 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613592507241 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552364465646 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123883930998 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521406918173 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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