The diagram below shows the fire plan for the second floor of a student dorm building in a university.
The diagram illustrate a university's fire prediction plan for the second floor of students hostle building.
After scrutinizing the diagram, it is observer that in south-west corner behind the stairs 1 meeting point will present as well as in north-west corner will two bedrooms construct after that
3rd bedroom will build in front of the stairs.
Probing further, in north-east direction, lift will be available beside the stairs and 2nd meeting point will front of the bedroom seven. Meanwhile, 4 and 6 bedroom will design opposite to the stairs, whereas bedroom 5 will attach with the six bedroom.
Overall, fire plan for the second floor, there will be many facilities added for students. Total seven room will build and many facilities will give for hostle students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The diagram illustrate a universitys fire prediction plan for ...
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Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
The diagram illustrate a universitys fire prediction plan for th...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r will two bedrooms construct after that 3rd bedroom will build in front of the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 664.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 126.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26984126984 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57530816488 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 177.3 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5495616747 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191935000525 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140495313025 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158445172769 0.0843802449381 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146021694824 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155253077876 0.0819641961636 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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