Some people think that money is a essential for happiness and people cannot imagine their life without money do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Money plays a Paramount role in everyone's life without money one cannot survive in his life because of this he cannot complete his basic needs like cloth ,shelter and bread. I think it is right if people have money then they can live happy life. I will discuss my agreement in subsequent paragraph.
To embark upon, there are myriad reason behind my agreement. First and foremost is that they can easily fulfill their elementary needs and they never crave from them nor feel that situations because they become habitual to live a luxury life. As a result, the enjoy their life with full of enthusiasm owning of money. Moreover, those people who have a money they live stress free life because they do not have a worry about their future as well their next generation's future. If they feel stress then they do travel to different places because travelling does act like a stress buster for them as they enjoy there a lot.
Furthermore, no doubt if people live luxury life then they have a unique status in the society because sometimes they do help to other needy people and gain respect from them as well feel deep sense of satisfaction in mind or soul. As consequence, they relish their happy life. Apart from this, if rich people fall sick then they can easily afford expensive treatment for themselves and can beat that diseases. They can also take healthy diet and join gym for taking care of their fitness level only because of money. Consequently good health provides happiness to everyone's so that is why rich people feel happy because of good health.
In epilogue, undoubtedly happiness is just a state of mind but without money it cannot be possible because if people cannot complete their basic need then how they can feel happiness.
- Many people prefer to communicate with their online friends than to socialise with people in their local communities Do you think it s has more advantages or disadvantages 75
- Environmental pollution and climate change have emerged as harsh realities today Whose responsibility is to put a halt to it the public s or the government Give your opinion about it 81
- Some people say that reading books is beneficial for children while others favor watching movies. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- The table gives information about average hours spent per week in front of computer by people different age group in China 91
- More and more women leaving their homes for work many people think husband should help their wives in households work What extent do you agree or disagree with these people 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...unt role in everyones life without money one cannot survive in his life because o...
^^
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nnot complete his basic needs like cloth ,shelter and bread. I think it is right i...
^^
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... happy life. I will discuss my agreement in subsequent paragraph. To embark ...
^^
Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bsequent paragraph. To embark upon, there are myriad reason behind my agreem...
^^
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rst and foremost is that they can easily fulfill their elementary needs and they ...
^^
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ual to live a luxury life. As a result, the enjoy their life with full of enthusiasm owni...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 519, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...ir fitness level only because of money. Consequently good health provides happiness to every...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, apart from, i think, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80592105263 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32006324763 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536184210526 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5911184361 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.357142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29478276402 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123991665543 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084048355826 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223193528896 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532094709752 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.