The diagram below shows how coffee beans are processed.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates the process for making coffee from coffee beans. It takes number of steps to go from coffee beans on the trees to the coffee we can drink at home.
First of all, the ripe coffee beans on the plants are manually harvested. Then, they are sent to the depulper, which seperates the seeds from the cover of the beans. After being sent to the depulper, coffee beans are soaked into the water in fementing tanks in one to three days. Next, the farmers dry the beans by lay them on the soil, which has been ploughed. The dryed beans are put on sorters on which those beans are sorted carefully. Then, the beans go through the roaster, which roasted them by heat. Before the beans are loaded onto trucks and transported to the grocery store, they are grinded into powder by a grinder. Finally, the consumer mixes the coffee powder with water and enjoys a delicious cup of coffee.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 82
- Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like Is it good for children What are the consequences when they grow up 52
- Throughout the history, people dream to built a perfect society while they haven’t agreed how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make ? How to achieve an ideal society? 73
- Most country aim to improve the standard of living through economic development, but most of the important values are lost.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is to provide free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ees to the coffee we can drink at home. First of all, the ripe coffee beans on t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56441717791 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09091779371 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558282208589 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.4283291908 43.030603864 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.4 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174007280436 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732046427311 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058375183337 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154941951432 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453915026861 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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