The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

The following diagram illustrates the process of coffee manufacturing, and preparation for sale on the market.

It is clear that the whole procedure can be divided into 11 stages. It mainly consists of producing coffee and commercializing it as a consumer good.

The first stage involves the crop of the coffee beans, in order to dry them with the assistance of the sun. Then, beans are placed in an oven to dry. Subsequently, this is followed by a cooling process.

The next step is to grind them in order to make powder. In the following stage, this powder is placed onto a cistern, in the co...

*** The full content of this essay is available to VIP readers

Votes
Average: 8.1 (19 votes)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2018-10-23 mimeomahong 89 view
2021-10-10 Vuthungan 78 view
2017-03-26 ShirleyR 56 view
2019-07-24 ankit5908 11 view
2019-11-14 pritam 11 view

Comments

flaws:
Need to go more details with the key words in the pictures like: pick up, roast, strain, jars...

'in jars' not 'in a package'. Don't change to something wrongly. Write exactly according to the graphs.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 167 200
No. of Characters: 728 1000
No. of Different Words: 91 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.595 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.359 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.647 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 47 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 32 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.917 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.155 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.33 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.572 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.067 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4