The diagram below depicts an entire coffee production and packaging process for retail in shops and supermarket.
Overall, in order to supply coffee in the pattern of jar, this process prolong through 10 steps from picking the coffee beans at the beginning to packaging them into smaller parts.
To begin with, farmers will harvest a large amount of coffee beans on their farms, then drying raw coffee beans before they are roasted. In addition, prior to grinding period, coffee beans are rapidly cooled to avoid numerous impacts of the environment.
On the fifth step, from raw materials, after grinding into coffee powder, they are mixed with hot water for a time and then being distributed into 2 categories including water and coffee via straining period. After that, this mixture experienced freezing process to become frozen liquid before being grinded again on the 8th step. At the end of whole production process, the coffee frozen liquid are dried in a vacuum to extract water vapor before packaging into jars puts an end to this total coffee process to ready sale in supermarkets and shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 511, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s an end to this total coffee process to ready sale in supermarkets and shops.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03278688525 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38620809466 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1053101503 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.571428571 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194255009758 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102960738794 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101657009387 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147721440859 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111338974461 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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