the diagram below shows how electricity is generatrd in a hydroelectric power station summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the production of electricity in a hydroelectric power station. Overall flows from river into a high level reservoir and end with the transmission of power lines to national generator.
It can be clearly seen that the first step is collect water in a high level reservoir when the generation begins the water passes through an intake which is in the bottom of dam. The intake opens in the day allows the flow of water to generate electricity and is closed at night the water flows out into the river below the dam during pumping. The next step is the transportation of water into a reversible turbines which is connected with generator in power station. In the day the generator is operated that water flow down into low level reservoir at night the reversible turbines pum water into high level reservoir finally the generator in power station is linked with power lines which are used to transport electricity to national generator.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'turbine'?
Suggestion: turbine
...ansportation of water into a reversible turbines which is connected with generator in p...
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rbines which is connected with generator in power station. In the day the generat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9018404908 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72181148208 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472392638037 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8557910699 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.166666667 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105335423041 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859447681517 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955853210885 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117277527717 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495631698008 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.