The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn

The given diagram illustrates the production of ethanol fuel from corn.

Overall, it can be seen obviously that there are 9 stages in the process, commencing with collecting the corn and concluding with delivering product to the gas station.

Looking at the picture in more detail, the first step is that corn is collected and then stored in warehouses. Then, it is sent to the milling before being cooked for 4 hours with water added to the mixture. After that, it is moved to the fermenting stage, the obtained product has to be fermented for about 2 days.

Following this, the next stage is separating the product into two forms, one is the liquid and the other is solid by-product. Subsequently, solid by-product is eliminated whilst liquid is purified in 5 hours and eventually after purification, ethanol is produced. Then, the finished product is stored into trucks so as to transport to the gas station, ready to be sold.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 314, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... finished product is stored into trucks so as to transport to the gas station, ready to ...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, then, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90566037736 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74997437877 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1082897838 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113455138811 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702173029751 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134428090259 0.0843802449381 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127672465959 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169557422658 0.0819641961636 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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