The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The pictorial representation illustrates the process of how noodles are prepared within a few minutes. There is total eight steps to make noodles.

First of all, flour is carried by one truck and then transferred into one silos storage to one pipe. After that, the flour is mixed with water and oils into the mixer. Moreover, now mixers are ready to give a flat shape and through one machine one wide dough sheet is prepared. Now this comes in the next step where this sheet is cut into long thin strips. Here almost half of the process is done to make noodles.

Furthermore, automatic strips are arranged in noodles discs with equal weight. Out of all this step is the main part of this process where strips are cooked with oil and then the drying process is applied. After these noodles are mixed with Ingredients such as vegetables and spices and then these noodles are full up in one cup. last step of this process is labelling and selling where labelling is done by outside of the cup and then pack into box. New these noodles are ready to eat.

Overall, this is an eight-step process of how noodles are from flour and ready to eat. It is observed that all work is done by machinery. this is an easy process to make noodles.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...n these noodles are full up in one cup. last step of this process is labelling and s...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ved that all work is done by machinery. this is an easy process to make noodles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, then, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.0 314% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54017857143 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25781222415 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504464285714 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5400283781 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0813471863466 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344674221057 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507897342794 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663490500228 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405760355262 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...n these noodles are full up in one cup. last step of this process is labelling and s...
^^^^
Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ved that all work is done by machinery. this is an easy process to make noodles.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, then, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.0 314% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54017857143 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25781222415 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504464285714 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5400283781 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0813471863466 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344674221057 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507897342794 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663490500228 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405760355262 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.