The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce fertilizer (compost). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below shows how to make fertilizer or compost by recycling organic waste.
To begin the process changing organic waste to fertilizer, first, preparing a plastic container which required volume is 2 cubic meters. The air is needed to turning the organic waste to compost so that many air holes are created vertically on the bottle wall to ventilate air in and out the inside of the bottle. The next step is putting organic garbage into the bottle. News paper, grass and wasted food is added in. Each of the layer are 15 centimeters thick. At the following stage, nitrogen and hot water are being added with the previous added waste to create the mixture of solid waste, liquid and air.
Afterward, the mouth of the bottle is sealed with the lid. The mixture is left there for 6 months. During 6 months, the decomposition are happened and the heat with air ventilates through the vents which have been created before. After 6 months, the organic waste totally transform to fertilizer which can be use for the garden.
Overall, the process of converting organic waste to compost takes 5 step and 6 months to completely convert.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 372, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: Newspaper
...utting organic garbage into the bottle. News paper, grass and wasted food is added in. Eac...
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Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'step' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'steps'.
Suggestion: steps
...erting organic waste to compost takes 5 step and 6 months to completely convert.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78680203046 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43525769546 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593908629442 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1333207452 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5833333333 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200872833625 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790564528727 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129310930826 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184928752661 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177328199379 0.0819641961636 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.