The diagram below shows how recycled paper is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The procedure depicts the way paper was recycled, and some key notes.
Overall, there are several steps to reprocess paper had been used, at the beginning of process is making pulp which the paper cask is moved by conveyor belt to pour into water and chemical. The ending of it is go through hot roll and water and it is rolled by reel.
Regarding the first step is making pulp includes moving cask storage used paper by conveyor belt to spill through the filter pulp, and it went to water and chemical to cleaning dirty ink. After that, the pulp paper was unfiltered and poured in the store barrel. At the next stage, the pulp was pumped into the storage pool including liquid mix are water and soap to wash it, and this step added ink and used air to be mixing. When pulp paper was washed, then it went through water and chemical again, and became white color.
At the final step, the pulp paper from the barrel water and chemical was put on the conveyor belt again, went through the heat roll and water to became rolls paper. As a result, the procedure recycle old paper become new paper.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...water and chemical. The ending of it is go through hot roll and water and it is ro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, regarding, so, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45771144279 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.94820432999 2.65546596893 73% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532338308458 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3354977899 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5555555556 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0863672249661 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048677143801 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039507162784 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642095165321 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239592531436 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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