The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is the diagram depicting the process of producing sugar from sugar cane.
It is conspicuous that the linear process has numerous steps from harvesting sugar canes through various processing steps, and it ends with the output as crystal sugar.
First, sugar cane which grows for 1 to 1,5 years, depending on the cultivar or care, is harvested when the leaves are dry, the bottom and the top are practically the same sweetness. There are two manners for obtaining are craft or using modern machinery to harvest with higher yields.
Following this is the crushing of cane into juice by using a sugar mill. After being extracted from canes, the juice is mixed with other impurities, the pH is low and acidic. Limestone filters are used to clean/ sort out... sugarcane juice and increase the pH. After that, this juice is evaporated into syrup.
Subsequently, the centrifuge generates centrifugal force to separate sugar crystals from the syrup. Drying the sugar crystals helps brightness and increases the preservation time. Finally, sugar is cooled before packing to produce.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he juice is mixed with other impurities, the pH is low and acidic. Limestone filt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22159090909 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54833821034 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647727272727 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0328160454 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5833333333 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245228334471 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901833311435 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939884403046 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166669850807 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976023574298 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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